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Re: My Purge
Hullo KS. Welcome to the literary side of YWS. ^_^ As for the piece itself, oy, I'm rather bewildered. Each paragraph seems to stand nearly on its own, but as ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Bat Island- Prologue
Ciao Pretty Crazy. ^_^ I rather like the point of view - from bats. ^_^ It brings to mind Brian Jacques and Redwall; and you take it in stride, you ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Upon Hearing..
Hullo Alex. Welcome to YWS and all that. ^_^ I'm glad you've already posted something literary - 'tis a good way to dive right in, so to speak. As to ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Oddly New!!!
Hullo AntaseaD. ^_^ Welcome to YWS! It is a most excellent place to have fiction read and critiqued. (Er, yes, 'tis spelled correctly.) Reading others' work, and reviewing or critiquing ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: On Wrestling
Oy, welcome to YWS. ^_^ I rather like this. Its rhythm has the feel of a rap, which fits neatly with the subject - a sport. ("Life was dull / ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Im New
Welcome to YWS! Oy, d'you write anything other than journalism? I rather like to write anything, I suppose. ^_^ Feel free to PM me if you need a critique or ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: I hope you Like my Writings
'Lo Kat. ^_^ Welcome to YWS. Oy, I even came back after nearly dying. Er, meaning it's good. If you've any questions, feel free to PM me -- or any ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Happiness
Hullo Halcyon! There are bits -- like strands of the mentioned tapestry -- I rather like in this. Hands like doormice. Sucking life out of a cigarette (oy, apt in ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: My Sci-Fi story (good, bad?)
Ciao SF. ^_^ Firstly, it sounds as if you've an apt imagination--you're thinking of a baseboard for a tale. You have the world, following the apocalypse; you have the slight ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Please, in need of reviews desperately.
Oy, you might get a bit better known -- and a bit more help -- if you critiqued others. One tends to get treated in kind. Perhaps dash around reviewing, ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: YWS Super Reviewing Bash on January 31, 2010
Er, RSVP from the grave. Yes? ^_^;
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Share your Playlist
Oy, this is hilarious. ^_^ Singing in the shower : Dig a Little Deeper by Jennifer Lewis (or perhaps)Diky Muschina or Malyenkiy Malchik by Leningrad A bad day : Semolyot ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: A Study in Scarlet
I love photos of type, it seems -- there's something about them like gauze or lace in black and white. And the story you can't quite see in blurred lines, ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Queen of the Stars
The Imp would like to make the type and / or literary equivalent of a jig, along with impudent impetuous impenitent importunate laughter in response to the Jigster's indefatigable and ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Jack-in-the-book (2)
Sela -- To be a writer / pen's a miter / and crozier for the crowds / who look for light / 'mongst prose's bite, / and find it, stout ...
Nov 22, 2009
